The diagram below displays the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below displays the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a
ladybug
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as well as
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the anatomical structure it contains.
Overall
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, from the egg
stage
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to being adult, there are four main stages in the life span of a
ladybug
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and as for anatomy, it contains structures more or less similar to the other arthropods
except
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a few special appearances.
However
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, The life cycle of
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ladybug
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starts from the eggs which
last
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for 2 to 5 days and
then
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the larval
stage
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comes. At
this
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period, the larval
stage
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lasts for about 21 days, during which the cylindrical-shaped larva grows,
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after that, the larva gets encircled with a structure by itself, forms a cocoon and enters into the pupa
stage
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.
This
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pupa clings to a leaf and
this
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period lasts for 7 days until an adult
ladybug
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comes out of the cocoon.
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, like other arthropods, the whole structure of
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ladybug
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the ladybug
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can be divided into head and body regions. The head part contains eyes, a special body part called a pronotum and antennae at
the
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both sides of the head. Meanwhile, the body region
is consisted
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with
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legs, wings, and an abdomen.
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, The ladybird’s wings are bright red with distinctive black spots.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ladybug, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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