The diagram below displays the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a
ladybug
as well as
the anatomical structure it contains.
Overall
, from the egg stage
to being adult, there are four main stages in the life span of a ladybug
and as for anatomy, it contains structures more or less similar to the other arthropods except
a few special appearances.
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However
, The life cycle of ladybug
starts from the eggs which Fix the agreement mistake
ladybugs
last
for 2 to 5 days and then
the larval stage
comes. At this
period, the larval stage
lasts for about 21 days, during which the cylindrical-shaped larva grows, and
after that, the larva gets encircled with a structure by itself, forms a cocoon and enters into the pupa Correct word choice
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stage
. This
pupa clings to a leaf and this
period lasts for 7 days until an adult ladybug
comes out of the cocoon. On the other hand
, like other arthropods, the whole structure of ladybug
can be divided into head and body regions. The head part contains eyes, a special body part called a pronotum and antennae at Correct article usage
the ladybug
the
both sides of the head. Meanwhile, the body region Remove the article
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is consisted
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consists
has consisted
with
legs, wings, and an abdomen. Change preposition
of
Lastly
, The ladybird’s wings are bright red with distinctive black spots.Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ladybug, stage with synonyms.
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