You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph demonstrates the
points
scored by three teams( A,
B
and
C
) during various
seasons
encompossing
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encompassing
2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005. Units are measured in
points
.
Overall
,
Team
B
won the activity with a large margin
throught
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through
throughout
the given period. Significantly,
Team
C
garnered
comparatively
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less
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lower
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score. Noticeably,
Team
A
was securing
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secured
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third
position
in the initial years
jumped
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and jumped
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to second
position
in the final two
seasons
.
According to
the graph, in 2002,
Team
B
became
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first by earning 82
points
whereas
Team
C
and
Team
A took second and
third
position
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positions
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by 10 and 5
points
, respectively. In
an
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another season of 2003,
Team
B
scored the highest point of 60 followed by
Team
C
and
Team
A by 15 and 11
points
. In every
seasons
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season
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,
Team
B
secured its first place by 43
points
in 2004 and 55 pts in 2005.
In contrast
,
Team
A exhibited an upward trend by jumping from
third
position
to second
position
by 35
points
and 8
points
in 2004 and 2005.
However
,
Team
C
fell to
the
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third
place by 12
points
and 5
points
in the
last
two
seasons
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words points, b, c, seasons, team, third, position with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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