You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph demonstrates the
points
scored by three teams( A,B
and C
) during various seasons
encompossing
2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005. Units are measured in Correct your spelling
encompassing
points
.
Overall
, Team
B
won the activity with a large margin throught
the given period. Significantly, Correct your spelling
through
throughout
Team
C
garnered comparatively
Correct article usage
a comparatively
less
score. Noticeably, Fix the agreement mistake
lower
Team
A was securing
Wrong verb form
secured
third
position
in the initial years jumped
to second Correct word choice
and jumped
position
in the final two seasons
.
According to
the graph, in 2002, Team
B
became
first by earning 82 Verb problem
came
points
whereas
Team
C
and Team
A took second and third
position
by 10 and 5 Fix the agreement mistake
positions
points
, respectively. In an
another season of 2003, Remove the article
apply
Team
B
scored the highest point of 60 followed by Team
C
and Team
A by 15 and 11 points
. In every seasons
, Change to a singular noun
season
Team
B
secured its first place by 43 points
in 2004 and 55 pts in 2005.
In contrast
, Team
A exhibited an upward trend by jumping from third
position
to second position
by 35 points
and 8 points
in 2004 and 2005. However
, Team
C
fell to the
Correct article usage
apply
third
place by 12 points
and 5 points
in the last
two seasons
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words points, b, c, seasons, team, third, position with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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