Task 1: Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

Task 1: Supermarket Plan

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
A map shows the proposed two locations for a supermarket in
Garlsdon
town
which has 65,000 residences.
Garlsdon
is mainly an industrial
town
with two small housing areas in the north and the south and a city centre in the middle. One railway and three main roads cross the towns. The first location is suggested to be northwest of
Garlsdon
town
, which is located in the countryside. The land lies between the main road to Hindon
town
and the railway. With
this
suggested site, the supermarket will be accessible to the people of Hindon
town
which lies 12 km away and has a population of 10,000 people. The second suggested location is in the center of
Garlsdon
town
, which is a traffic-free zone.
This
proposed site is toward the south which is crossed by the roads Bransdon and Cransdon towns.
Brandsdon
Correct your spelling
Brandon
town
is 16 km to the southwest of
Garlsdon
with an estimated population of 15,000.
While
Cransdon
town
is 25km to the southeast of Grlsdon with 29,000 people living in
this
town
.
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