Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

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A map shows the proposed two locations for a supermarket in

Garlsdon

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town

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which has 65,000 residences.

Garlsdon

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is mainly an industrial

town

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with two small housing areas in the north and the south and a city centre in the middle. One railway and three main roads cross the towns. The first location is suggested to be northwest of

Garlsdon

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town

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, which is located in the countryside. The land lies between the main road to Hindon

town

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and the railway. With

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suggested site, the supermarket will be accessible to the people of Hindon

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which lies 12 km away and has a population of 10,000 people. The second suggested location is in the center of

Garlsdon

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town

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, which is a traffic-free zone.

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proposed site is toward the south which is crossed by the roads Bransdon and Cransdon towns.

Brandsdon

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Brandon

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is 16 km to the southwest of

Garlsdon

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with an estimated population of 15,000.

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Cransdon

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is 25km to the southeast of Grlsdon with 29,000 people living in

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town

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

173 words

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