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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of average
changes
 in
house
 costs in New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and
London
 from 1990 to 2002 compared with the average change in 1989.
Overall
, in the first five
years
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 the
percentage
 of
changes
 in
house
 prices decreased dramatically .
However
, in the
last
 five years increased significantly.
London
 has the highest
percentage
 of
changes
 in
house
 prices. The
percentage
 change from 1990 to 1995, in New York, Tokyo and
London
 dropped significantly nearly -5% and -6% for both respectively.
While
 in Madrid and Frankfurt increased slightly to 2% and 3% respectively. From 1996 to 2002 the average proportion of
changes
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change
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 costs of houses in
London
 increased dramatically to over 10 per cent. Meanwhile, houses in New York and Madrid increased significantly to 5% and 4%. The
percentage
 change in
house
 prices in Tokyo
also
 grew slightly to only -5%. Whilst in Frankfurter dropped slightly to only 2 per cent.
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