The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.

The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.
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The pie chart illustrates the way of generating electrical
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in Ireland by using four
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resources as proportions,
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, the table describes the usage of
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in five variety ways.
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with, it is clear the most
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of energy is coal with 45% which places it significantly ahead of the most important source. Gas is ranked second as producer of
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with 35%.
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, the other natural
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resources are taking place as 20% of
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.
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, we can observe clearly that using electrical
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for heating wastes more than half of the energy
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phone charging and consumer Electronics have the same percentages as the lowest energy expended from other reasons.
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, lighting and kitchen Appliances spend approximately 35% of the
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overall
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, there are different types of
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resources that prove to us that we never lose electrical
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in one day but the table explains the wide reasons for wasting
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which encourages us to take responsibility for using it in a good way to make our lives better.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity grid
  • Renewable energy
  • Environmental impact
  • Economy
  • Energy mix
  • Carbon emissions
  • Industrial consumption
  • Residential use
  • Government policy
  • Seasonal variations
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