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The graph below show the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below show the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
#show #differences #wheat #exports #three #areas
The supplied line graph indicates data regarding the rate of
wheat
exports
 in three various regions namely
AUSTRALIA
,
Canada
,
European
Community
 over the period of 5 years from 1985 to 1990. Units are delineated in
millions
 of
tonnes
.
Overall
, the
wheat
exports
 of the
Canada
 and
European
Community
 showed a steady but significant rise over the period,
while
 the
millions
 of
tonnes
wheat
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exports
 in
Australia
 experienced a downward trend. In 1985,the
exports
 of
wheat
of
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the
Canada
 and
European
Community
 were nearly 19 and 17
millions
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of
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tonnes
 respectively.From 1986 to 1988,
Canada
 experienced a noticeable increase to 25
millions
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of
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tonnes
.
Subsequently
, it witnessed a negligible decrease to approximately 14 .
However
,
Canada
 experienced a substantial rise
18
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millions
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tonnes
.Between 1986 and 1988,
European
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Community
 made up 15
millions
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tonnes
,
then
,It saw a tremendous
an
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upward trend
about
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 22
millions
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of
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tonnes
. Starting at 15
millions
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million
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tonnes
 in 1985
Australia
 experienced a negligible rise to 17 in 1986. From 1987 to 1989, It witnessed a noticeable decrease to approximately 11
millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
,
then
, between 1989 and 1990 ,
Australia
 remained unchanged
millions
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 of
tonnes
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, australia, canada, european, community, millions, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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