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The graph below show the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below show the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
#show #differences #wheat #exports #three #areas
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The supplied line graph indicates data regarding the rate of
wheat
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exports
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 in three various regions namely
AUSTRALIA
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,
Canada
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,
European
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Community
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 over the period of 5 years from 1985 to 1990. Units are delineated in
millions
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 of
tonnes
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.
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, the
wheat
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exports
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 of the
Canada
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 and
European
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Community
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 showed a steady but significant rise over the period,
while
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 the
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 of
tonnes
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wheat
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of wheat
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exports
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 in
Australia
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 experienced a downward trend. In 1985,the
exports
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 of
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of
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the
Canada
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 and
European
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Community
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 were nearly 19 and 17
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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 respectively.From 1986 to 1988,
Canada
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 experienced a noticeable increase to 25
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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.
Subsequently
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, it witnessed a negligible decrease to approximately 14 .
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,
Canada
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 experienced a substantial rise
18
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of 18
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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.Between 1986 and 1988,
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European
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the European
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Community
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 made up 15
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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then
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,It saw a tremendous
an
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upward trend
about
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of about
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 22
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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. Starting at 15
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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 in 1985
Australia
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 experienced a negligible rise to 17 in 1986. From 1987 to 1989, It witnessed a noticeable decrease to approximately 11
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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,
then
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, between 1989 and 1990 ,
Australia
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 remained unchanged
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millions
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in millions
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 of
tonnes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, australia, canada, european, community, millions, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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