The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the layout changes of road access to a
City
Hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there
is
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was
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an addition of some road features in 2010 that didn't exist before in 2007, one of them is
an
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the
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addition of the roundabouts located
in
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on
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the two
corner
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corners
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of
the
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apply
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Hospital Street, and the rest of them are the
relocate
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relocated
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of bus station and
car
park
. In 2007, the bus stop
is
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was
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located on the edge of Hospital Rd with a
car
park
on the left side. The old
car
park
was built to
accomodated
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accommodate
accommodated
staff
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the staff
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of the
City
Hospital
as well as
the visitors. Meanwhile, in 2010, there
are
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were
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significantly
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significant
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changes
of
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in
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the layout. We now have two roundabouts located at the North
center
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centre
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and the South
center
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centre
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of
the
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apply
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Hospital Street, and the bus stop now has a station located at the West side of Hospital Road (at the Southwest of the
City
Hospital).
Moreover
, they now
seperate
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separate
operate
the
car
park
,
for
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so
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the staff remain in the same area as before,
while
the public should
park
their
car
to the East of the
City
Hospital.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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