You are currently taking a course at a university but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the university of Dean. In the letter: •Give details of your course •Explain why you need a week off •Say what you want the Dean to do.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter regarding a week off during my course. My name is Leo and I am a student of your university holding student ID number 12345. My course is related to analysing the data of C language.

Due to

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I need a break of 7 days during my semester. The doctor recommended

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have full bed rest and strictly warned me not to use a computer or laptop. Working long hours in front of screens made my spine and eyes shight weak. My professor gave us a practical task which needed to be done in the upcoming week but my health would not allow me to do

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under the time frame. I request that

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you look into

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matter and give me more time to complete the task

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will give me relief and I would appreciate your support. looking forward to hearing from you, yours faithfully, Leo

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coherence cohesion

In your letter, use a more formal closing to match the overall tone, such as 'Yours sincerely,'

task achievement

You have mentioned all required details, but try to expand slightly on how this break may affect your studies to fully address the task.

task achievement

You have clearly mentioned your course details, the reason for the leave, and what you want the Dean to do.

coherence cohesion

The letter follows a logical structure with distinct paragraphs for each point.

task achievement

You maintained a polite and formal tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for the audience.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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