JUNE 29 EXAM DISCUSSION The charts below give information about different types of waste disposal in one country in 1960 and 2011.
The pie charts provide data on the various types of misuse disposal in one country in 1960 and 2011.
Overall
, in 1960 and 2011 the largest categories were Food
and Paper, while
Wood and Other sections held the smallest waste
disposal.
The biggest waste
disposals in 1960 were Paper, Textiles, Others and Food
, with 25%, 17% and 12%, respectively.However
, whilst Food
increased its share to almost half.The paper saw a notable decrease to 15 per cent
. Despite a minor decrease of 10 % to 15 per cent
in 2011.Food
replaced Textiles as the highest waste
disposal in 2011. Whereas
, Other figures decreased slightly from 12 to 4 per cent
in 1960 and 2011.
The remaining five competitors had around a tenth of the total in 1960 each.However
, the Wood increased by 4% in 2011 compared to 1960 and was 8%. The five smallest trends, the percentage of Green waste
, Metal, and Glass unchanged, they stood at 9%, 9%,and 5% per cent
in 1960 and 2011.Plastic went from the smallest share in 1960 to the second largest in 2011, achieving a percentage of 18.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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