The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way of producing a biofuel called
ethanol
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that through a cycle, which includes farming operations before affecting urban areas,
ethanol
is produced which
then
converts to carbon dioxide.
Initially
, plants and trees absorb sunlight and carbon dioxide which are the major driver of energy for them to grow. After harvesting the green space by farmers and doing pre-processing, cellulose can be extracted for
further
use.
As a result
, in industrial areas,
this
vital substance is set to undergo a process to convert to sugar. By adding specific microbes to sugar to change the characteristics of it,
ethanol
will be produced.The produced
ethanol
is
then
stored for future needs
such
as healthcare systems. it should
also
be noted that
ethanol
plays a key role as fuel in transportation areas
such
as cars, trucks and airplanes which are the highest consumers.
Consequently
, these vehicles emit carbon dioxide again which completes the cycle process.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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