Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they release from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

There have been many cases of prisoners

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crimes after they get released from

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prison

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of the crimes are different depending on the criminal;

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, there is a common motivation for most situations. In the case of robbery, the thieves usually have financial problems or

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debts lead to stealing other

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valuable things or even invading individual houses which will allow people to repeat the actions after getting arrested because their personal problems are not solved

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unemployment, the reasons are they probably have

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level of education which leads to limited skills to have opportunities to work. The practical

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to decrease the illegal records is

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government should prioritize

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issue by investing money to allocate

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stable careers for the prisoners after they are released. Providing assured work is a door to open the prospects to fix their finances and

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life. In the jail,

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should arrange the professional skills

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, once they are taught it enables them to identify their abilities and find what they need to improve

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there has been a case, where the prisoners discovered their talents and brought those techniques in the work

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. In conclusion, these methods will not be effective if the government

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not accommodate the criminals’ lives after

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prison by offering steady

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or introducing them to

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companies. I believe that these strategies can reduce the rate of

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crimes in our society.