Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. In your letter - Describe the situation you are facing - Why you consider it a problem - What changes you would like to recommend

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about an issue with the city bus transportation system, and I would like to propose some potential solutions. My name is Pramod, and I reside on Front Street in Toronto. Recently, I have experienced significant delays in the arrival of city buses at the bus stop. As a frequent user of public transportation for my daily commute to work, these delays have made it difficult for me to arrive on time over the past few days.

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problem not only affects me but

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impacts many other commuters.

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, several individuals have received notices from their employers regarding their punctuality. It is evident that

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issue needs to be addressed urgently.

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, I would like to recommend conducting a thorough investigation to identify the root causes of these delays in public transportation by appointing an investigating officer. Thank you for your attention to

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matter. I hope you will consider

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issue soon. Yours faithfully, Pramod.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure to maintain a clear progression of ideas throughout the letter.

Task Response

Expand on potential solutions with more detail.

Coherence and Cohesion

Clear and appropriate greeting and closing.

Task Achievement

Addresses the problem with clarity and provides a recommendation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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