The pie charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.

The pie charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.
The pie charts provide data about various kinds of
waste
disposed in a government from 1960 to 2011.
Overall
,it can be seen that
while
in 1960 the highest
figure
belonged to Paper, in 2011 It turned to Food.
To begin
with, in 1960 the highest
figure
was 25% of Paper,
while
the lowest was 4% of Wood and 5 glass.It has been doubled to 8% in terms of Plastic and Metal . There was a similar
figure
in terms of Green
waste
about 9%.The Food and Other were the same that was 12%. The Textiles was more than 17%. In 2011 the highest
figure
was Food at 21% and the smallest was Other at 4%,the similar
figure
was Glass
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5%.The Green
waste
and Metal had the same index 9%,a little less was Wood by 8%. The figures for Plastic and Paper were 18 and 15 % respectively,
however
,
waste
disposed of by Textiles was 11%.
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