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The table and charts give information about doctors in Australia between 1186 and 2006

The table and charts give information about doctors in Australia between 1186 and 2006
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The table demonstrates how many people in
Australia
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 worked as
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doctor
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doctors
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 in 1986, 1996 and 2006,
while
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 the bar charts show their genders and where they are originally from in the same years. It is,
overall
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, apparent that the quantity of both male and female
doctors
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 in
Australia
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 grew noticeably, with males dominating throughout the given period. Of
a
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particular note is that the percentage of native-Australian
doctors
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 declined,
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 that of non-natives went up, eventually showing
the
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 equal share
at the end
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 of the period. Looking at the table, there were 23,720
doctors
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 working in
Australia
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 in 1986, which witnessed an increase in numbers, reaching 29,060 a decade later. That figure
then
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 ended with 35,450
doctors
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 in 2006. As far as gender is concerned, male
doctors
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 were much more than female ones in all given years,
although
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 the percentage of male
doctors
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 declined and that of women went up. Roughly 75% of
doctors
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 were males in 1986, 3 times greater than female
doctors
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. In 1996, the figure was about 66% and a half of it for males and females, respectively.
This
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 indicator changed to slightly more than 60% for male
doctors
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 10 years later, meaning nearly 40% of
doctors
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 were females. As for their birthplace, more than 60% of
doctors
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 were from
Australia
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 in 1986,
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 the rest belonged to non-native Australians. A decade later,
this
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 figure was less than 60% for
doctors
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 born in
Australia
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,
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 about 42% were those from other countries. Coming to the
last
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 given year, the number of
doctors
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 born in
Australia
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 and overseas
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 the same
due to
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 the decline of Australian
doctors
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 and the growth of
doctors
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 from foreign countries.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, doctors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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