The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.
The maps illustrate the newest enhancements in the town of Kimsville, at different times in 2002 compared to today.
Overall
, in the past, the city
was more natural than now.
In 2002, the city
centre
was in the middle of the town and a factory was on the eastern side, and 4 forests covered the corners of Kimsville. In addition
, a shopping centre
was elected to be in the north of the city
centre
. In contrast
, an old cinema was established in the south.
In the meantime, the city
centre
and shopping centre
are in the same place, and 2 forests in the northeast and southeast of the town. On the other hand
, many constructions have been built, the factory changed into a software company. Furthermore
, the old cinema switched into a pub, additionally
, the forests which were on the west side have been removed and a football stadium has been constructed in the southwest, on the other west corner, a new building of new apartments has been created. Finally
, a new train station was built in the west.Submitted by bajahzar90 on
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