Recent research has confirmed that ‘human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life’. Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

Nowadays, the population of human beings is growing and

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has a significant influence on the viable resources on the earth like flora and fauna . In

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essay, I generally agree and

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will argue the reasons behind

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issue and illustrate a method to solve

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problem that

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on

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our natural resources. Analysing the first perspective, there are many causes related directly

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reduction in species. First and foremost, It's illegal poaching and fishing by killing rare species which could

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the ecological balance .

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, human exploitation could

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to

extinction

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of some animals and plants

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a severe reduction in biodiversity.

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, Another reason is related to

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building

factories and modern industries, which

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harmful gases and

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produce air pollution and

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living species at greater risk

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, fossil fuels industries produce huge amounts of carbon emissions which affect

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the trees and cause serious damage in the area around them .

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there are many factors contributing to

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crisis ,

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goverments

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governments

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and people should

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forward to many

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to avoid harming nature .

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with,

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the Goverment

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Goverment

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should allow certain laws for hunting animals and fines to

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the amount of people who

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the laws .

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, the result is quite miserable , it will

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the whole ecosystem,

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,

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kill

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all the insects which

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benefitcial

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beneficial

to prevent pesticides from crops . In conclusion, it is undoubtedly

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fact that

humankind

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menace is a big threat to the

world

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ecosystem . I think authorities should avoid unacceptable pursuits by

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them to

oay

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pay

extra if they

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not care about the environment and should

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some

compaigns

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campaigns

to cover these subjects

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be enough to save the resources of our plants.