Recent research has confirmed that ‘human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life’. Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?
Nowadays, the population of human beings is growing and
this
has a significant influence on the viable resources on the earth like flora and fauna . In this
essay, I generally agree and i
will argue the reasons behind Change the capitalization
I
this
issue and illustrate a method to solve this
problem that impact
Change the verb form
impacts
on
our natural resources.
Analysing the first perspective, there are many causes related directly Change preposition
apply
with
Change preposition
to
this
reduction in species. First and foremost, It's illegal poaching and fishing by killing rare species which could effect
the ecological balance . Correct your spelling
affect
Consequently
, human exploitation could leads
to Change the verb form
lead
extinction
of some animals and plants Add an article
the extinction
causes
a severe reduction in biodiversity. Wrong verb form
causing
Secondaly
, Another reason is related to Correct your spelling
Secondly
buliding
factories and modern industries, which Correct your spelling
building
releases
harmful gases and Correct subject-verb agreement
release
thus
produce air pollution and impose
Verb problem
put
the
living species at greater risk Correct article usage
apply
for example
, fossil fuels industries produce huge amounts of carbon emissions which affect on
the trees and cause serious damage in the area around them .
Change preposition
apply
Eventhough
there are many factors contributing to Correct your spelling
Even though
this
crisis , still
Add a comma
still,
goverments
and people should Correct your spelling
governments
government
looking
forward to many Wrong verb form
still look
solution
to avoid harming nature . Change to a plural noun
solutions
To begin
with, Correct article usage
the Goverment
Goverment
should allow certain laws for hunting animals and fines to Correct your spelling
government
minimum
the amount of people who Replace the word
minimise
contradicts
the laws . Correct subject-verb agreement
contradict
Therefore
, the result is quite miserable , it will effect
the whole ecosystem, Correct your spelling
affect
for instance
, it's
Unnecessary verb
it
kill
all the insects which Correct subject-verb agreement
kills
is
Change the verb form
are
benefitcial
to prevent pesticides from crops .
In conclusion, it is undoubtedly Correct your spelling
beneficial
the
fact that Correct article usage
a
humankind
menace is a big threat to the Change noun form
humankind's
world
ecosystem . I think authorities should avoid unacceptable pursuits by Change noun form
world's
inforcing
them to Verb problem
encouraging
oay
extra if they Correct your spelling
pay
did
not care about the environment and should Wrong verb form
do
held
some Change the verb form
hold
compaigns
to cover these subjects Correct your spelling
campaigns
would
be enough to save the resources of our plants.Correct pronoun usage
which would
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