Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Other thing that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's era, the most alarming situation in every country is
road
accidents. To resolve the situation of this
issue some stated that by taking some action related to improving road
safety
by reducing the speed of automobile technology others reject the formal notion and mention other ways that can be suitable for this
situation. In my point of view speeding tickets, proper road
signs and proper driving lessons should be an important part of maintaining road
safety
.
According to
those people
who assume that by the cut of the maximum speed of vehicles would be the best solution to improve road
safety
. By eliminating the speed of maximum speed there should be fewer chances of road
crashes. Most people
try to cross the minimum speed which leads to more chances of car accidents because if every person follows the same speed there is less chance of traffic congestion. In 2020, 25% of traffic congestion was reduced in Karnal by reducing the speed limit in different sectors.
Some other people
state that following proper road
signs with speed limit signs can be an effective way to reduce road
incidents. Furthermore
, proper rules
and regulations should be followed by every citizen if somebody abides by the rules
strict actions should be taken such
as fine tickets. For Example
, In 2000 Indian government took strict action for those who did not follow the road
safety
rules
and started giving online fine tickets. They installed cameras on roads and 70% of road
accidents decreased.
In my opinion, It is the responsibility of every citizen to follow the rules
and regulations which are made for their life safety
. The government should also
take strict action who do not follow the rules
and put other people
's lives in danger. 24-hour monitoring should be required. Reducting the maximum speed of vehicles will only help in some situations but if every person takes these steps seriously every person on the road
is safe.
To conclude
everything, limiting the speed of vehicles is a good way to enhance road
safety
but other ways also
play a vital role in more safety
of the road
and people
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Task Response
Make sure to clearly develop each main point with adequate explanation or examples. The opening paragraph introduces the topic and your opinion, but it could be more precise by clearly stating both views you're comparing. This ensures clarity in your overall response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Although the essay generally follows a logical structure, there are instances where the flow can be improved. Consider refining transitions between ideas, particularly when contrasting views, to ensure clarity.
Introduction and Conclusion
You have an effective introduction and conclusion which adequately address the topic and give a clear opinion.
Use of Examples
Your argument about speed limits and examples provided (such as the Karnal example) support your main points.
Task Achievement
Your essay reflects a good understanding of the topic, and you provide multiple perspectives on improving road safety.
Fully explain your ideas
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