The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts provide information about the advantages and the disadvantages of Bowen Island
by
tourists.
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for
It is clear that
more than half of the survey participants were not satisfied with Linking Words
its
cost of living. Change the word
the
On the other hand
, they were very happy Linking Words
about
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with
people
who Correct article usage
the people
live
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lived
in
the island.
Focusing on the first picture, it can be seen that, after Change preposition
on
high
cost of living, the other three main reasons Correct article usage
a high
of
dissatisfaction were lack of entertainment(25%), poor weather(15%), and low food quality(10%). The proportion of people who were unhappy with entertainment was the same as the sum of the percentage of weather and that of food quality.
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for
However
, 35% of Linking Words
respondants
thought that the place had Correct your spelling
respondents
a
great scenery. Culture and good Remove the article
apply
accomodation
were Correct your spelling
accommodation
accommodations
also
included in the most common advantages of Linking Words
this
place, accounting for 12% and 11% respectively. But, we can still see that the Linking Words
majorty
of visitors (77%) come to the island because of its residents and its scenery.Correct your spelling
majority
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