Many government thinks that economic progress is their most important goals, some people however thinks that other progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

From many years ago, the

strenght

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strength

of a government or a nation

is determine

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by the

strenght

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strength

of their

economy

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.

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many think that a

country

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's progression in the

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economy

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economic

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sector

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is important, I believe that other areas

such

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as

education

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is

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equally as important. On the one hand, a rich government is a powerful government.

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Economy

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The economy

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sector

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contributes a major financial capital for a

country

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.

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is important for the growth of one

country

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.

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,

Singopore

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Singapore

has been a very important

country

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for their import-export in the South East Asia region from many years ago until now. With a strong

economy

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, they managed to be a developed, independent

country

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despite

it's

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very small scale size.

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, literacy is important to shape a nation. A

country

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's image is

being

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reflected by

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population and

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can be moulded only with a proper

education

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.

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, a

country

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with

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an abundace

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abundace

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abundance

of minerals and resources

are

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less useful, if not

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managed by an intellectual person.

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,

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education

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the education

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sector

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needs to be emphasized to ensure the

country

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's

prosper

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prosperity

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to

last

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. In summary, I strongly agree that other sectors including

education

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is

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equally important to be taken seriously

and

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not just the

economy

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sector

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. A strong and powerful

country

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has both an independent

economy

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and a high standard of

education

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level.