Your are stayig at your friend’s house who is travelling to another country. A recent strom damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend and say What happened and when What was damaged in the house What needs to be done about it
Dear Raman,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about a thunderstorm that came last
night near 11:30pm and it damaged your kitchen window.
During the rainy time, everything was good but suddenly a strong wind broke the kitchen glass
around 1:45 pm that you installed last
month. I could not sleep properly due to
the bad weather so, I decided to watch a movie, in the interval, the glass
was damaged. Then
, I fixed the window with the cardboard. But, heavy rain also
wet the cardboard and water came into the kitchen. After an hour, I cleaned the area and fixed it again.
Immediate action is necessary because it may cause theft in your house. Call the glass
company to replace it with a new one because storms cannot damage it like this
. And, request them to fix the best quality glass
. As well as
send me further
details. I will take care of all before your return. If you are busy with work then
send me the contacts of the company,and I will talk to them.
Hoping for a prompt response from your side regarding this
serious problem.
Yours lovingly,
RohitSubmitted by harmandeep51075 on
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task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and appropriate tone throughout, suitable for a communication with a friend.
task achievement
The letter provides a clear and concise account of the storm event, making it easy for the friend to understand what happened.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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