The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts display the causes of people going to
work
by cycling or driving.
Overall
, the primary reasons
for cycling to work
are health and fitness and, less pollution. While
the majority of drivers chose comfort. The lowest reason for cyclists was that cycling is faster than driving and for drivers, it was safer than cycling.
The highest proportions of reasons
for cyclists were health and fitness, and less pollution, at 30% each, followed by no parking problems at 15%. The smallest percentages of reasons
people prefer to go to work
by bike were no costs and faster than driving, at 13% and 12% respectively.
Almost half of the people prefer to go to work
driving was
for comfort, at 40%, followed by distance to Unnecessary verb
apply
work
at 21%. The lower percentage of reasons
were faster than cycling and carry
things to Wrong verb form
carrying
work
at 14% each. The lowest percentage of the reason was safer than cycling, at only 11%.Submitted by daniruspi on
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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