The bar chart provides data on the number of biths given per woman in 6 Gulf countries in 2 seperate years 1990 and 2000.

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The given bar graph illustrates information about the numbers of

births

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per female in Bahrain, Kuwait, Qatar,

Oman

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, S.

Arabia

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and the UAE in the

years

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1990 and 2000.

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Oman

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and

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Saudi Arabia

Arabia

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experienced more

births

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in both

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as compared to other Gulf countries.

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, it can be seen that there were more

births

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per woman in earlier

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as compared to 2000 in all six Gulf nations. When examining the details, it becomes evident that

Oman

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and

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Saudi Arabia

Arabia

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showed the highest fertility rates in both 1990 and 2000 as compared to others.

Oman

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had 7

births

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per woman in 1990 which decreased to almost 6 in 2000.

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, S.

Arabia

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experienced an almost 6.5 birth rate in 1990 which

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declined to almost 6 in 2000.

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, the UAE and Qatar showed almost the same pattern of birthrate with just over 4 in 1990 and around 3 in 2000.

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, Bahrain and Kuwait

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showed almost the same pattern of birth rate as well in both

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with almost 3.5 in 1990 and 2.5 in 2000.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Topic Vocabulary:

birth rate
fertility rate
Gulf countries
economic development
social policies
healthcare improvements
population growth
decade
significant change
trend analysis
implications
variation
consistency
population dynamics
demographic changes

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The bar chart provides data on the number of biths given per woman in 6 Gulf countries in 2 seperate years 1990 and 2000.

In some contries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that governments should invest mainly in making public transportation faster while other think there are more important priorities (cost, the environment). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today's society is based on laws and rules. It can't function well if individuals are free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree?