The graph below shows the number of immigrants to three countries from 1990 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of immigrants to three countries from 1990 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates how many
people
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immigrated to three different nations, namely the
USA
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,
Canada
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, and
Australia
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over a ten-
year
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period
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, starting from 1991.
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, there was a rise in the
number
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of migrants to
Australia
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and
Canada
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, but to varying extents;
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the opposite was true for the
USA
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. Despite witnessing a decrease, the majority of
people
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chose the
USA
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as their destination to settle down over the
period
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examined. In terms of the most attractive country for immigrants, there were over 1400
thousand
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people
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moving to America in 1991, after which it experienced a sharp increase and peaked at 1800
thousand
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people
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a
year
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later, and
then
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this
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figure decreased noticeably to 1000
thousand
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in 1993. From
this
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year
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onwards, the
number
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of foreigners living in the
USA
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fluctuated and reached 900
thousand
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in the
last
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year
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of the
period
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. Dissimilarly, no significant changes in the figures for
Canada
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and
Australia
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were recorded throughout the
period
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, in spite of
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a slightly
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slightly climbing
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. Specifically, the
number
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of immigrants to
Canada
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remained unchanged until 2000, after that, it rose moderately to over 400
thousand
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people
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in 2001. A similar trend was seen in that
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Australia
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, where the
number
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of migrants to
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nation started to witness a minor rise to about 190
thousand
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people
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in the
last
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year
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,
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after it had stayed stable from 1991 to 1999.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, usa, canada, australia, period, number, thousand, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • immigration trends
  • significant increase/decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steadily
  • sharp spike/drop
  • over the given period
  • comparative analysis
  • growth pattern
  • immigrant numbers
  • variations
  • main features
  • highlighting
  • stark differences
  • overall trends
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