The graph below shows the number of immigrants to three countries from 1990 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how many
people
immigrated to three different nations, namely the Use synonyms
USA
, Use synonyms
Canada
, and Use synonyms
Australia
over a ten-Use synonyms
year
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period
, starting from 1991.
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Overall
, there was a rise in the Linking Words
number
of migrants to Use synonyms
Australia
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Canada
, but to varying extents; Use synonyms
while
the opposite was true for the Linking Words
USA
. Despite witnessing a decrease, the majority of Use synonyms
people
chose the Use synonyms
USA
as their destination to settle down over the Use synonyms
period
examined.
In terms of the most attractive country for immigrants, there were over 1400 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
moving to America in 1991, after which it experienced a sharp increase and peaked at 1800 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
a Use synonyms
year
later, and Use synonyms
then
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this
figure decreased noticeably to 1000 Linking Words
thousand
in 1993. From Use synonyms
this
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year
onwards, the Use synonyms
number
of foreigners living in the Use synonyms
USA
fluctuated and reached 900 Use synonyms
thousand
in the Use synonyms
last
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year
of the Use synonyms
period
.
Dissimilarly, no significant changes in the figures for Use synonyms
Canada
and Use synonyms
Australia
were recorded throughout the Use synonyms
period
, in spite of Use synonyms
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a slightly
slightly climbing
. Specifically, the Replace the word
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number
of immigrants to Use synonyms
Canada
remained unchanged until 2000, after that, it rose moderately to over 400 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
in 2001. A similar trend was seen in that Use synonyms
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Australia
, where the Use synonyms
number
of migrants to Use synonyms
this
nation started to witness a minor rise to about 190 Linking Words
thousand
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people
in the Use synonyms
last
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year
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,
after it had stayed stable from 1991 to 1999.Remove the comma
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