The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of readymade noodles.
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, it is evident from the diagram that the process involves 8 different steps, starting from flour storage in the silos and ending with labelling and sealing the container.
First of all, flour is transported to the silo hub and stored in the silos. After that, Linking Words
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flour is poured into the mixer, where water and oil are added. The mixed mass Linking Words
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passes through roller dough sheets are produced. Linking Words
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these sheets go through a cutter to produce dough stripes. Linking Words
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, noodle discs are obtained by coiling dough strips.
In the next stage, these discs are cooked in oil and dried by an electric drier. Linking Words
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, after drying fried noodles are poured into the cup, where vegetables and spices are mixed with it. Linking Words
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, these cups are labelled and sealed by airtight sealer machines, and the end products are ready to sell and eat.Linking Words
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