The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pairs of pie charts present the information of the population of two different countries,
Yemen
and Italy, respectively. The given time period is from 2000 and the future estimation of 2050.
Overall
, it can be seen that three different age
groups from 15-59
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to 59
years
are rising in Italy as compared to Yemen
, whereas
the age
group
of 0 to 14 years
are
more than Italy. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Moreover
, people of 60
plus Correct article usage
the 60
age
group
will slightly increase in Yemen
while
Italy will see a sharp rise
in this
age
group
.
Both countries will see the
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a
rise
in 15
-59 Correct article usage
the 15
years
age
group
of people in the next five decades where Yemen
represented 46.3 percent
in 2000, which will see a Change the spelling
per cent
rise
in 2050 by
growing to 57.3 Change preposition
apply
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, in 2000 same age
group
remained at 61.6 percent
, which covers more than Change the spelling
per cent
a
half of the data, Correct article usage
apply
while
it will see a sharp decline in 2050 at 46.2 percent
. In both countries, Change the spelling
per cent
60+
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the 60+
years
age
group
illustrates a considerable difference, like in Yemen
starts
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started
from
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at
3.6percent
in 2000 and will go up by the increase of almost 2 Correct your spelling
3.6 per cent
percent
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per cent
at
5.7 Change preposition
to
percent
only in 2050. Change the spelling
per cent
Whereas
, Italy will see a sharp rise
in the same group
of age
from 24.1 percent
in 2000 to 42.3 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2050.Change the spelling
per cent
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