the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The diagram illustrates how many
visitors
come to an individual Caribbean island
between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, it is clear from the illustration that the amount of people who want to visit the island
increased from 1 million
visitors
in 2010, to 3.5 million
in 2017.
According to
what is shown, the number of tourists who like to accomodate on the island
, and on cruise ships rose from 700 thousand, and 0.2 thousand in 2010, to 1.5 million
, and 2 million
in 2017, respectively. Meanwhile, the number of tourists staying on the island
had a slight decrease to around 200 thousand visitors
in 2016.
Furthermore
, the number of visitors
who booked rooms on the island
was more than those who booked it in
cruise ships, till 2015.Change preposition
on
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