You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: •explain which course you are interested in •say what you know about the university • explain why you should receive the scholarship
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter to let you know that I am interested in applying for Bachelors
in Change noun form
Bachelor's
Business
Administration course. I studied commerce in my higher secondary and I want to learn more about business
administration in detail.
I have had
heard many good things about Unnecessary verb
apply
the
Brighton College. As a leading name in teaching various Correct article usage
apply
Business
courses, the faculty is highly praised by many business
magazines, because the teachers are very experienced. Adding more to it, the unique methodologies that institute
Correct article usage
the institute
employ
to teach difficult topics are Correct subject-verb agreement
employs
also
admired by the passouts of this
college.
I have heard about the prestigious scholarship that institute
gives to Correct article usage
the institute
the
pupils, who Correct article usage
apply
scored
above 95 per cent Wrong verb form
score
of
marks in their higher secondary exams. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, I propose myself for this
scholorship
, because I scored 98 per cent of marks in my higher secondary exams.I hope you will give me the information I asked for and I am looking forward to hearing from you .
Yours faithfully,
Jatinder.Correct your spelling
scholarship
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The letter is well-organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
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coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing were correctly used and appropriately formal.
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