Many people believe that the overconsumption of refined sugar is a major problem in the world and should be regulated the same as alcohol and tobacco. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate over how to solve the overconsumption of refined carbohydrates. Many individuals claim that it ought not to be regulated the same as alcohol and tobacco,

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point of view. Admittedly, proponents of the idea that regularisation of

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intake is undeniable that it borders citizens' preferences. After regulation, individuals can not consume it for their desire,

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becomes dissatisfaction among city-dwellers.

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why, these types of prevention block up personal freedom and choice.

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, regulating

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intake contributes to economic instability.

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means that

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action might be detrimental

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the food and beverage industry; the production of companies decreases

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since business owners have to produce in limited quantities of carbohydrates. As an example, in Azerbaijan, strict regulation resulted in hurt businesses significantly, leading to job losses.

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, the overconsumption of candy is the major contributor to health problems

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as diabetes, and heart disease. These diseases lead to

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significant healthcare costs and reduce quality of life, similar to tobacco and alcohol.

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a reason why the government should introduce the law in order to prevent over-intake of

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, in Switzerland, authorities signed new reforms for a brighter future against eating

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, bread, and drinking alcohol;

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, citizens suffer less cardiovascular illness.

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substance might be addictive in overconsuming,

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studies, when individuals eat a large amount of

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, they can not manage themselves which leads to negative consequences. In conclusion,

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the regularisation of

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intake borders humans' preferences and mitigates economic growth, I am of the opinion that the government should control by law in order to prevent citizens from health risks associated with overconsumption.