You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: •explain which course you are interested in •say what you know about the university • explain why you should receive the scholarship
Dear Sir/madam
Hope
this
letter finds you well.I am writing this
letter to show my interest in the course
which I am going to take in my future studies
.
Well
my name is Navdeep and I have recently completed Add the punctuation
Well,
by
graduation in Civil Engineering in 2022 withCorrect your spelling
my
A
grade Correct article usage
an A
therefore
, I am interested to
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in applying
apply
a relevant Add the preposition
apply for
course
in your university for next year for my future studies
.
Apart of
that, Change preposition
from
according to
my previous studies
I am interested in take
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taking
one
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a
year
certificate Correct your spelling
one-year
course
and moreover
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moreover,
this
course
has a
scholarship benefits for Correct article usage
apply
the
international students.
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apply
According to
my research
I found that your University Add a comma
research,
named
Macewan is one of Verb problem
apply
best
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the best
University
in Alberta State which has Fix the agreement mistake
Universities
a
best record in Academic Change the article
the
Studies
.In addition
campus is situated in the center of the city . I believe I do not find any difficulties in searching for accomodation
.
As I have passed my previous Correct your spelling
accommodation
studies
with A
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an A
grade
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grades
therefore
, I Add the comma(s)
, therefore
would
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from
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this
course
.
Looking forward to hearing a positive and prompt response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Navdeep BajajSubmitted by navdeepbajaj89 on
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coherence cohesion
Consider adding a clear introduction and conclusion to improve the logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses mainly on a single idea to enhance clarity.
task achievement
The letter contains a clear explanation of the interested course and reason for scholarship benefits.
coherence cohesion
Contains appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.