The bar graph shows what kinds of food ingredients were popular for Korean people between 1970 and 2000.

The bar graph shows what kinds of food ingredients were popular for Korean people between 1970 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of five
food
ingredients that Korean people chose in four different years with the
ten years
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interval ,starting from 1970.
Overall
,it can be seen that
rice
was the most selected ingredient in all the years given.
To begin
with,
Rice
had the most fluctuating pattern with the highest
number
of choices.In the first decade,there was a significant increase from 65 to 80 choices in 1980.
However
,after that
year
rice
declined gradually to reach its lowest in 2000.Vegetables began at the same
number
as
rice
in the
year
1970 but had a downward trend with the figures decreasing to 55 in the
year
2000.
On the contrary
,meat,fish and processed
food
had opposite tendencies.
Although
they had different starting points ,accounting for 25 in meat,30 in fish and 15 in processed
food
,in the
last
three decades the
number
rose in all groups at various rates.Processed
food
seemed to have the most increasing rate.Its
number
exponentially grew to peak at 70 in 2000 followed closely by meat which continuously grew to 65 in 2000.
Whereas
fish increased in the first decade and remained constant at 40 choices after the
year
1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, food, rice, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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