The graph below shows average world GDP in six regions of the world during the first decade of the 21st century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average world GDP in six regions of the world during the first decade of the 21st century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare projections of two years' production in terms of 6 important categories.
Overall
,
it is clear that
, in terms of production by industries, there will be no important changes. Services and Manufacturing fields will be producing the largest
proportion
of the total.
In contrast
, the smallest
proportion
will be obtained by the Materials sector. In 2040, the greatest
proportion
of production will be in the Services area which will represent 40%, whilst in 2060 the figure for
this
category will increase to 41%. Meanwhile, Manufacturing will
also
surpass a steady increase from 31% in 2040 to 33% in 20 years. The third sector with the biggest
proportion
, the Info-Com Tech, will
also
go beyond a slight rise of 1%, accounting for 16% in 2060. In both, the smallest
proportion
of forecasted manufacturing is Materials, with only a change of 1% between both periods. Afterwards, Energy is expected to represent 7% of the total in 2040.
However
, a small decrease of 2% is predicted for 2060.
Finally
, the Agriculture sector is the worst anticipated, it is supposed to reach 4% in 2040 and overcome the biggest drop to 1% in the
last
annual period.
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