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The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps provide key information about before and after proposed new
changes
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 in the old
town
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that there are a lot of
changes
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 in
Barmouth
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 they make two of the car parks.
According to
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 what is shown on the map before the
changes
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 there were only two ways to
Barmouth
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 first
one
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 from the main
road
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 and the second
one
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 there was from the bridge in the wast of
Barmouth
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 there was
Barmouth
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 old
town
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 and from the main
road
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, there was a
road
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 entrance to the old
town
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. In terms of,
Barmouth
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 after the proposed
changes
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 they made two cars park first
one
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 from the main
road
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 and the next
one
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 from the bridge, the entrances come foot only to the old
town
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 and
Barmouth
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 old
town
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 stat in his place in the river tweed they make a new bride and between bridge and river tweed they make supermarket.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, town, barmouth, one, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • congestion
  • pollution
  • pedestrian-only zones
  • environmentally friendly
  • landscaping
  • public transport system
  • vehicular movement
  • central area
  • tourists
  • eco-friendly
  • cycling paths
  • health-conscious
  • attractive
  • residents
  • visitors
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