The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps provide key information about before and after proposed new
changes
in the old town
. Overall
, it is clear from the graph that there are a lot of changes
in Barmouth
they make two of the car parks. According to
what is shown on the map before the changes
there were only two ways to Barmouth
first one
from the main road
and the second one
there was from the bridge in the wast of Barmouth
there was Barmouth
old town
and from the main road
, there was a road
entrance to the old town
. In terms of, Barmouth
after the proposed changes
they made two cars park first one
from the main road
and the next one
from the bridge, the entrances come foot only to the old town
and Barmouth
old town
stat in his place in the river tweed they make a new bride and between bridge and river tweed they make supermarket.Submitted by mona11omar33 on
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