You are a member of an International Students’ club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event
Dear Luis,
I am writing to
suggestion
a Replace the word
suggest
dish
from India, which I am sure every one
would like to try at the international popular food event. My name is Pramod, and I am a member of the club.
I would be happy to prepare a Replace the word
everyone
dish
for the event. The dish
name is “Paw Bhaji”, which is a Change noun form
dish's
reknown
fast-food Correct your spelling
renown
known
amongs
Indian people. It is Correct your spelling
amongst
among
bit
spicy and easy to make.
To tell about the cooking process, it Correct article usage
a bit
start
with boiling Change the verb form
starts
mix
of vegetables as per your liking Correct article usage
a mix
then
add
it in tomato pure mixed with Wrong verb form
adding
variety
of spices. It is served with white bread toasted with butter Add an article
a variety
along with
a glass of butter-milk
.
The reason behind serving Correct your spelling
butter milk
this
dish
at the festival is that there are many people from India who are going to attend this
event aslo
it Correct your spelling
as
is request
by many students as they like food from India.
I hope you take my suggestion under consideration and looking for to your reply.
Yours sincerely,Change the verb form
is requested
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coherence cohesion
Ensure every paragraph focuses on a single idea. Consider separating the description of the cooking process into a new paragraph for clarity.
task achievement
Proofread for grammar and spelling to correct minor mistakes such as 'suggestion a dish' instead of 'suggest a dish', 'reknown' which should be 'renowned', and 'amongst' for 'among'.
task achievement
You have completed the task requirements by offering to make a popular dish from your country, describing it, and explaining why it should be included in the event.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and logical structure with appropriate greeting and closing, which helps the reader to understand your request easily.