You are a member of an International Students’ club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event

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Dear Luis, I am writing to

suggestion

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dish

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from India, which I am sure

every one

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everyone

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would like to try at the international popular food event. My name is Pramod, and I am a member of the club. I would be happy to prepare a

dish

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for the event. The

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dish

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name is “Paw Bhaji”, which is a

reknown

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renown

known

fast-food

amongs

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amongst

among

Indian people. It is

bit

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spicy and easy to make. To tell about the cooking process, it

start

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with boiling

mix

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of vegetables as per your liking

then

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add

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it in tomato pure mixed with

variety

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a variety

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of spices. It is served with white bread toasted with butter

along with

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a glass of

butter-milk

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butter milk

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. The reason behind serving

this

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dish

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at the festival is that there are many people from India who are going to attend

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event

aslo

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is request

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by many students as they like food from India. I hope you take my suggestion under consideration and looking for to your reply. Yours sincerely,

Darshita@8612Fri Nov 15 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure every paragraph focuses on a single idea. Consider separating the description of the cooking process into a new paragraph for clarity.

task achievement

Proofread for grammar and spelling to correct minor mistakes such as 'suggestion a dish' instead of 'suggest a dish', 'reknown' which should be 'renowned', and 'amongst' for 'among'.

task achievement

You have completed the task requirements by offering to make a popular dish from your country, describing it, and explaining why it should be included in the event.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear and logical structure with appropriate greeting and closing, which helps the reader to understand your request easily.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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