The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts below display the most popular positives and negatives of
the
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island
,provided by a survey of visitors.
Capitalize word
Island
Overall
,it appears that the high cost of living on the brown island
is the biggest downside to visitors, whereas
both the people and the scenery are the most popular advantage
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advantages
according to
them .
According to
the data , it is clear that
living on the island
is not cost-friendly because 50% of visitors reported that it is the biggest disadvantage , followed by entertainment with approximately a quarter of the chart , the last
two are weather and food quality with 25%.
On the other hand
, there are the advantages with the biggest advantage being the people of the
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island
with almost half, Capitalize word
Island
while
the scenery comes second with 35%, finally
culture and good accommodations which combined take up 23% of the answers.Correct word choice
and finally
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