The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Austriala are currently attending.
The pie chart illustrates the distribution of
dance
class locations, while
the bar chart indicates the participation of young people in three kinds of dance
classes
in a town in Australia.
Overall
, it is clear that
private studios
are the most popular locations for dance
classes
and the least preferable is college-based studios
. In addition
, modern dance
classes
are mostly favoured by secondary school
students, while
ballet classes
are more popular among pupils under 11.
Having looked at the pie chart more closely, we can see that private studios
account for the highest percentage at 48%, which is double the proportion for classes
in school
halls. Nearly a fifth of dance
classes
are held in community halls and other places, while
college-based studios
are the least common, taking up only 10% of the total.
Turning to types of dance
classes
, 600 children under 11 years old are learning ballet, which is twice as many as the number of pupils from 11 to 16 years old. A similar trend is seen in tap dancing, with about 450 primary school
students compared to around 420 middle school
pupils. This
contrasts significantly with modern dance
classes
, where just over 500 children aged 11-16 participate, compared to 300 younger students.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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