The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of students who studied a foreign
language
namely: French, German, Spanish
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and Spanish
Overall
, while
in both years girls studied mostly and the French Correct word choice
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language
was the study in 1984 and 2007.
In 1984, girls studied foreign languages approximately 50% and boys 30%.Coming to 2007 this
trend decreased to 40% and 25% respectively.
Between 1984 and 2007 French language
was studied by 50% but after 23 years it deep to 25%.The German language
was studied 20% but in 2007 it went down to about 15%. However
Spanish language
was studied by about 5% in 1984, and it increased from 5% to 10% in 2007.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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