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Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say how important New Year is to people in your country describe how New Year is celebrated in your country explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...... ,

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Dear Tom, I am so deeply interested in your project about celebrating New
Year
 in different countries that I guess I can talk about it for a whole afternoon.
However
, I will write it down concisely for your reference. Chinese New
Year
 is the most important festival of the
year
 in China, and almost everyone looks forward to it during the entire
year
 because it means hometown and reunion for the Chinese. On the Chinese New
Year
 Festival, we usually have a 7-day holiday. People from all around the country, no matter what their professions or locations, will set off for hometowns, to unite with their families. After a long or short journey home, there are tables of delicacy and smiles of family members waiting for them. I really enjoy the atmosphere during the New
Year
 Festival, which recalls the sense of homesickness deep inside my heart, and I believe most adult workers in China feel the same. Naturally, no one can refuse the word called home. Best Regards Yours Faithfully Marshall
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea to enhance clarity.
task achievement
Maintain a friendly yet formal tone throughout your letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear logical structure and flow.
task achievement
The response effectively addresses all parts of the task.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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