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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdoms, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdoms, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph indicates the amount of CO2
emissions
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 per individual in four countries: the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal, between 19967 and 2007.
Overall
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, it is clear to see that Portugal and Italy have a higher peak percentage than others, alternatively, the United Kingdom is more reduced at every moment.
While
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 Sweden has the most fluctuating number.
To begin
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 with, the countries that have the greatest quantities of carbon dioxide
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 like Portugal and Italy, which in 1967 had approximately 1.5 and 4.5
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,
in contrast
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, at the age 1987 it increased to about 3 and 6.5
tonnes
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;
moreover
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, the average of carbon emission in 2007 risen to around 5 and 7
tonnes
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.
On the other hand
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, even the UK started with 11
tonnes
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 in the figure for 1967 but it significantly decreased every time
likewise
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 in the years 1997 and 2007 the number of CO2
emissions
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 was lower than 10. Sweden is the most waving,
for example
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, in 1967 the data for CO2
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 was circa 9
tonnes
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,
however
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, in 1997, it expanded to 10
tonnes
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 of emission and in 2007 dropped to just 5
tonnes
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.
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