The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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the
amount
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number
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of visitors who
travelling
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travelled
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at
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to
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Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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island
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islands
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between 2010 and 2017. It depicts how many people
visiting
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visited
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this
island
over seven -
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a years
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years
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seven-year
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period.
Overall
, the number of people who arrived at Caribbean
island
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islands
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increased over the period given, At the
starting
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of the duration, staying on
island
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the island
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was the most popular, which was replaced by staying on cruise ships from 2016 to 2017 The amount of tourists who travelled
cruise
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on cruise
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ships,
it
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apply
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began
around
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at around
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0.3
millions
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million
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and
then
flactuated
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fluctuated
slightly between 2010 to 2013 before
steady
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rose
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rising
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to 2
millions
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million
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in the
last
year. On the other, the number of visitors who spend their
vocation
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vacation
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on
island
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the island
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stabilized at the
beginings
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beginning
beginnings
of
this
chart duration at 0.3
millions
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million
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and reached to peak at 1.5
millions
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million
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in 2013. Staying on
island
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the island
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remained steady from 2013 to 2015 before
oscillated
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marginally between 2015 to the end of
this
period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Trend
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stable
  • Dramatic rise
  • Gradual decline
  • Visitor numbers
  • Period
  • Data points
  • Rapid growth
  • Comparison
  • Tourism trends
  • Economic factors
  • Natural disasters
  • Marketing promotions
  • Seasonal variations
  • Impact
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