The graph below shows the number of immigrants to three countries from 1990 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of immigrants to three countries from 1990 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart compares data about how many people per thousand migrated to 3 various countries namely, the USA, Canada, and Australia between 1991 and 2001.
Overall
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, it was important that the number of people who went to the USA was reduced
while
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the other countries did not change visually over the period of 10 years.
According to
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the graph, at the start, the USA, the most popular country in which the most population emigrated, hit just over 1400;
then
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it rose and reached the vertex at 1800 in 1992;
however
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, it declined enormously to roughly 800 in 1996 ;
thereafter
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, it climbed moderately to roughly 900 in 1997, but it fell to the minimum point at approximately 700 in 1999 until 2000;
then
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it jumped to the same figure at 1997. The diagram demonstrates that in the beginning, Canada touched 200
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and after
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that, it increased marginally to almost 250 in 1994;
nevertheless
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, it reduced to upper 200 in 1995 and its number stabilized until 1999;
then
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it rose somewhat to nearly 450 in 2001. Australia, the
last
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country, recorded 100 in 1991;
then
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it dipped slightly to roughly 50 in 1994 and 1995;
then
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it grew to the same number at the start and after that, it nearly stabilized.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • immigration trends
  • significant increase/decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steadily
  • sharp spike/drop
  • over the given period
  • comparative analysis
  • growth pattern
  • immigrant numbers
  • variations
  • main features
  • highlighting
  • stark differences
  • overall trends
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