The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The Line chart illustrates information about the kinds of
food
that teenagers in Australia Use synonyms
enjoyed
eating.
Wrong verb form
enjoy
Overall
, the three categories experienced different trends in the time period, Despite Linking Words
thes
, it is crystal clear, Correct your spelling
this
the
Hamburgers were the Correct your spelling
that
highst
in the Correct your spelling
highest
last
year, in Linking Words
opposite
way Fish and Chips were the lowest number of times eaten per year.
As the graph shows, people of teenagers who Correct article usage
the opposite
take
Pizza and Hamburgers almost begin Verb problem
eat
in
2, Change preposition
apply
While
Linking Words
who
Correct pronoun usage
those who
take
Fish and chips started Verb problem
eat
in
100 youngest in 1975, Regarding Fish and chips were Change preposition
at
decline steady
until Replace the word
declined steadily
it
fell over 39, Correct pronoun usage
they
on the other hand
the two special Linking Words
food
in Australian were sharply increased Use synonyms
then
steady remained, about Humburgars were 100 of person Linking Words
furthermore
Pizza almost 83 teenagers.
In Linking Words
conclusion
I recommended families Add a comma
conclusion,
to
take for their children healthy Fix the infinitive
apply
food
Use synonyms
due to
their bodies, Linking Words
by
Change preposition
apply
constrat
the chart viewed the importance eat and delicious Correct your spelling
contrast
food
for Use synonyms
Add an article
the minor
a minor
minor
.Fix the agreement mistake
minors
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