The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land become lesson productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The provided diagram presents data on the reasons why global land degradation,
while
the table gives the cause of land degradation in three regions of the world during the 1990s.
It is obvious that over-grazing is the most significant all over the world, whereas
Europe is
the highest percentage of total land degraded, and the main reason is deforestation.
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pie chart, the proportion of degradation from over-grazing takes the lead among the others, comprising just over a third (35%), Replace the word
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while
the percentage of deforestation ranked second,
it is slightly less than one third
(30%). Add a hyphen
one-third
Furthermore
, 28% of the damage is caused by over-cultivation, and the remaining 7% is due to
other factors.
As for the table, Europe accounted for the highest rate of deforestation and over-cultivation, 9.8% and 7.7%, respectively. Moreover
, this
district has the largest proportion just under a quarter in total. However
, North America has the lowest total percentage, at exactly 5%. Oceania ranks second among other regions, gaining just 11.3% in overgrazing.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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