You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Luis,

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Dear Luis, I hope

this

message finds you well. I am writing to express my enthusiasm for the upcoming event celebrating popular food from around the world. As a proud representative of my country, I would like to contribute by preparing a

dish

that is

both cherished and iconic in our culture. The

dish

I propose to make is biryani. It is a flavorful and aromatic rice

dish

that combines basmati rice, tender meat (or vegetables for a vegetarian version), and a blend of fragrant spices

such

as cinnamon, cardamom, and saffron. Biryani is often garnished with fried onions, boiled eggs, and fresh coriander, making it a feast for both the eyes and the palate.

This

dish

is a symbol of celebration and unity in my culture, served at festivals, weddings, and family gatherings. Including it in the event will provide attendees with a taste of our rich culinary heritage and the warmth of our hospitality. I would be delighted to handle its preparation and ensure it is presented beautifully at the event. Please let me know your thoughts. Best regards, Sam

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task achievement

Consider adding more detailed information about the preparation or the significance of the dish to enhance cultural richness.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph sticks to a single main idea to maintain the strength of the structured presentation.

coherence cohesion

Excellent greeting and closing that enhanced the clarity of your message.

task achievement

The writing tone is highly suitable, showing both politeness and enthusiasm.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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