The given line graph illustrates the admission for five hospitals in a week in a European country form the year 2004 to 2018.
The given line chart illustrates the
admissions
of five hospitals in a European country from the year 2004 to 2018.
Overall
, the admissions
for Bradley Hospital and Adlin Hospital experienced increase
, Add an article
an increase
while
the admissions
for Oxley Hospital decreased. Stanton Hospital and Fortsmith Hospital experienced fluctuation.
In 2004, 200 patients
were admitted in
Bradley Hospital, and Change preposition
to
then
it experienced a gradual increase with a slight decrease. It reached at
its peak in 2018, which Change preposition
apply
were
255 patient Correct subject-verb agreement
was
admissions
per week
. In Adlin Hospital, in 2004, 130 patients
were admitted, and it experienced a gradual increase and
in 2018, it reached Correct word choice
apply
at
250 Change preposition
apply
patients
admissions
per week
.
However
, the admissions
of Oxley Hospital decreased, which started from 240 patient admissions
per week
and it experienced a decline which was 110 patient admissions
per week
. In terms of Franton
Hospital, around 180 Correct your spelling
Fronton
patients
were admitted per week
, and it experienced fluctuations and
in 2018, around 200 Correct word choice
apply
patients
admitted
in a Add a missing verb
were admitted
week
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