The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows what income Southland’s market overseas is likely to bring in a 25-year period. Generally, in each category differences persist. Unlike the first two, the category of meat

products

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reveals a small amount of international selling.

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international tourism and daily

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products

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sells show an increase,

export

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the export

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of meat

products

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predicts a decrease. A closer look at the data reveals that the profit from international tourism nowadays has a parallel rise with the profit from international tourism in 2025, it will rise from 8 billion pounds to almost 10. Regarding the export of

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dairy

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products

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, there is

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especially strong growth in

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year, it increased from 7 billion pounds to 10. It is

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indicated that

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number will remain approximately the same by 2025. The

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three columns highlight that the number of exported meat

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will show a

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fall, from 6 to 5 billion pounds

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

152 words

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