The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows what income Southland’s market overseas is likely to bring in a 25-year period.
Generally, in each category differences persist. Unlike the first two, the category of meat
products
reveals a small amount of international selling. While
international tourism and daily products
sells show an increase, Fix the agreement mistake
product
export
of meat Correct article usage
the export
products
predicts a decrease.
A closer look at the data reveals that the profit from international tourism nowadays has a parallel rise with the profit from international tourism in 2025, it will rise from 8 billion pounds to almost 10. Regarding the export of daily
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dairy
products
, there is an
especially strong growth in Remove the article
apply
current
year, it increased from 7 billion pounds to 10. It is Add an article
the current
also
indicated that this
number will remain approximately the same by 2025. The last
three columns highlight that the number of exported meat products
will show a continuously
fall, from 6 to 5 billion pounds Change the word
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