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spending on various categories in 5 nations in 2002. The table compares the percentage of consumers across 3 categories in these regions.It is clearly seen that the

category

of Personal Growth and Development had the lowest usage in the given table . Spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco accounted for the largest share in all five countries. Turkey ranked the highest, with 32.14% of consumer spending in

this

category

, followed closely by Ireland at 28.91%. Meanwhile, Italy and Spain had moderate proportions, at 16.36% and 18.80%, respectively.

On the other hand

, Sweden recorded the lowest spending in

this

category

, at just 15.77%, showing a noticeable gap compared to the other nations. These figures illustrate a significant variation in spending priorities across the countries. Expenditures on Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education were much lower compared to essentials. Italy led in spending on Clothing/Footwear, with 9%,

whereas

Sweden allocated only 5.40% to

this

category

, marking the lowest figure. For Leisure/Education, Turkey had the highest proportion, at 4.35%,

while

Spain allocated just 1.98%, the smallest percentage

overall

This

demonstrates that spending on leisure and educational activities was less prioritized, with significant differences between the countries in both secondary categories.

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the table below shows consumer spendings on different items in 5 countires in 2002. k

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadaysthan in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agreee or disagree?

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The government should be responsible for providing retirees with financial support and care. While many people think that citizens should save money to take care of themselves when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some school are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, While other schools have a very relaxed dress code. (What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?)