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Summarize the changes in the layout of the Woodward university

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The maps describe the changes that have taken place at Woodwards
University
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campus
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 over 37 years, starting from 1985.
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, the modern-day layout of the
campus
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 is a far cry from its previous state. The
university
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campus
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 is no longer accessible by
car
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 after major changes to the road structure. It is
also
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 worth mentioning that the
campus
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 has become more compact with
conversion
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the conversion
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 of different faculty buildings into one. Focusing on the initial appearance of the
campus
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, the
university
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campus
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 was split into north and south wings with a road that ran from east to west. A large
car
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 park could be found in the south-west of the
campus
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, which was directly across the admin building. The main road stretched
further
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 north, leading to the
second,
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smaller
car
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 park, which was flanked by Chemistry and Biology blocks to its north and west respectively. The Physics department building was located in the northernmost part, which was neighbored by a library in the
north-west
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northwest
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. The
campus
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 has seen a total transformation over the past 37 years. The library has been expanded southward, allowing much space for a new IT
center
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centre
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as well as
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 books. All three teaching buildings,
on the other hand
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, have been reconstructed into one, more spacious block called Science Laboratories. The small
car
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 park on the north wing has been removed to make way for a lecture theatre,
while
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 the admin building has shrunk in size and been repositioned more to the
center
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. The most radical change has been the removal of all the roads, which have been supplanted with footpaths connecting all the
building
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buildings
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.
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, the
university
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 is now accessible by
shuttle
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a shuttle
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 bus terminal in the
south west
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southwest
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introduction conclusion present
Ensure that your introduction sets up the essay effectively and that conclusions restate the key changes or trends noted.
logical structure
Add a brief overview of how the essay is structured at the beginning to help readers follow your logic more comfortably.
supported main points
You discuss the detailed transformation of facilities such as the library and IT center.
clear comprehensive ideas
The essay presents a holistic understanding of the campus transformation, effectively focusing on the most significant changes.
complete response
The essay provides a complete response highlighting the changes in road and building layout, achieving task objectives.

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