The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given layout illustrates the changes that will happen to a school in 1985.

Overall

, the car park has a new structure,

as well as

the construction of a new fitness

centre

and a pool near the playing field.

Also

, the design of the classrooms will be maximized or reduced,

while

the office

centre

will stay the same as before, near the entrance.

According to

the outline, the most significant development is that the library next to the office will be reduced in size and a new computer room will be installed.

In addition

, the existing classroom block located in front of the computer room will be maximized by opting for a three-story design. Another big change will be the addition of a pool and fitness

centre

adjacent to the playing field, and at the

centre

of the school, there will be a small park with trees.

Lastly

, the shape of the road in front of the car park will be changed to be semi-circular.

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