the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant

the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the number of US
households
sectored by five annual revenue groups (less than $25,000, $25,000-$49,999, $50,000-$74,999, $75,000-99,999, and above $100,000) in the years of 2007, 2011, and 2015. Units are measured in millions.
Overall
, it is evident that all the groups except for the third and the fourth
group
of
households
($50,000-$74,999 and $75,000-$99,000) slightly changed. The
group
that has under $25,000 annual income accounted for nearly 25
million
in 2007, slightly lower than the figures in 2011 and 2015, which is about 27
million
.
In addition
, the second
group
($25,000-$49,000) has the same trend as the first one, except that the data in 2011 closely reached 30.
Moreover
, the third
group
remained steady at about 21
million
in the years given. Meanwhile,
households
having $75,000-$99,999 annually
leveled
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off at nearly 15
million
in the years 2007, 2011, and 2015, respectively. As for the
households
holding above $100,000 annual revenues, it slightly fell to about 27
million
in 2011 from nearly 29.5 in 2007, after that, in 2015, the number climbed marginally to 33
million
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, group, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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