The map below shows the development of an area between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of an area between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes in an area from 1995 to the present.
Overall
, it is evident significant modifications undergone over the period given.
Furthermore
, the residential area has been expanded,
while
the fishing port and forest
park
have been removed, and the golf
park
has been replaced by
the
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farmland. Looking in more detail, there was the forest
park
which was located in the middle of the town in 1995 has been cut down, and some parts of these areas have been used for tennis courts.
Additionally
, farmland, which was situated at the northeast corner in 1995, has been converted into a facility for golf.
Further
change is that the fishing port has been destroyed. Regarding the other modifications, a new road was constructed which connected the west side of the town to the main road and
also
houses have been erected right part of
this
road.
In addition
, there was a shop and a fish market
in
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the southern street, which was replaced by a restaurant and an apartment, respectively. A hotel and cafe remained unchanged throughout the period,
although
a car
park
has been built
nearby
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near
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the hotel.
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